Okay...here goes...
http://imgur.com/ZknzvzgA few things:
1. this is the very first version. I admit it's nothing special at the moment but it's going to get better - that's why I came here
2. the round things are both ramps; I wanted this sort of layout for a very good reason. Hopefully when it's finished, the ramps won't look so wonky and horrible.
3. the red circles are bumpers, and the yellow circles are lights. The white circle with concentric circles is where I plan to put a kickout that is similar to Timeshock's crystal - but in a very different shape.
4. this is for my final major project at college, and I have not planned to make this a fully playable table - what I'll be presenting at the end will be the playfield redrawn in Inkscape.
Any questions or comments would be accepted and very much appreciated
Be as harsh as you like. This is the first time I've done anything like this and I'm not expecting an absolute game-changer but I want something that would at least be fun to play.
EDIT:
I've reworked it a bit, because it was missing something. I feel that there's enough to work with - almost.
https://imgur.com/P76dRJFIt's a bit wider and has a few things moved around a bit. You'll notice there's a big hexagon at the top - I have no idea whether this has done before or whether it'd even work, but that's supposed to be a roundabout-type device. There's no real way to render it in Visual Pinball, so it's just a hexagon for now.